ext_73077 ([identity profile] hrj.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hrj 2016-05-19 12:48 am (UTC)

The structural history of the story probably goes a long way toward explaining the uneven pacing. Now I may need to track down those earlier versions and do a comparison when I'm done with the main series.

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