Daughter of Mystery: Coming into the final stretch

[hrj]

I finally got around to reconstructing the text I lost in the Great BWI Coffee Shop Fiasco of 2011. It felt a bit shorter than what I remembered, which probably means I left out bits that I've forgotten. On the other hand, it contains everything it needs to and the rest can be adjusted for flow on the rewrite. On the other end of the story, we've just gotten through the big courtroom drama scene. (What, you didn't know that on top of everything else there was a Big Courtroom Drama Scene?) An accusation, an incriminating confession, a witness miraculously produced, the last-minute tension when it looks like the case isn't going to hold, and then the final nail in the coffin. My rough sketch of the POV-lets suggests that there are 5 move segments to write, but I need to outline which contents need to go where to know if that still works.